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New Brother, Electrike TF/AR

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New Brother, Electrike TF/AR

Pokemon, a unique race, they come in many shapes, sizes, colors, and personalities. Such unique creatures are sure to spark people’s curiosity. One of those creatures (ironically) is an Electrike, a rather cute creature that resemble a small dog. But, this is the story of a more unique Electrike, one that, for the first time, interacted with a human.

Little Jolt was born into a pack of Electrike Pokemon, Electibuzz, Ampharos, Pikachu, and many others. But they shared a common belief that it was a good idea to avoid humans, just so they don’t have to worry about trainers catching anyone. But, Little Jolt here had other plans, he wanted to do. He decided to take a stroll in the woods.

The forest around Jolt was very calm. the gentle wind blowing softly.  the rays of the sun filtering through the dark red autumn leaves. Jolt was having the best time of his life, he had never found himself searching around without the pack.

But, a voice caught him off guard.

“You hungry, Poochyena?”

Jolt jumped and backed away from the noise, afraid and scared. But when clearly, nothing attacked him, he calmed down. In fact, he got curious, careful hiding in the bushes and taking small peek. He searched around but no one was around so he continued his adventure in the woods, it was very calming.

But soon, he came across something, or someone.

A young boy feeding a Poochyena, Growlithe, Houndour, Furfrou, Herdier, and Vulpix. Jolt watched tentatively.

Poochyena caught a whiff of Jolt, and alerted the boy that someone’s closeby. “Whoever you are, come on out, We’ve friendly.” Jolt backed away very afraid, he had never come in contact like this before.

<”So you’re the one Poochyena smelled.”> a Voice said. Jolt became startled and began to whimper.

It was the Vulpix. <”Don’t be afraid, i don’t bite.”>

He cowered, <”I-I’m not suppose to be here…”>

<”Why not?”> Vulpix asked.

<”I-I can’t tell…”> He began to back away slowly.

<”I get it, pack rules? I was in a similar herd, but I told a chance and it worked out great.”> Vulpix said, <”You can trust me.”>

<”But i dont want to be caught…>”

<”Bradley doesn’t catch a Pokemon if they don’t wanna be caught, he’s a kind and caring boy.”>

He walked out from the bushes, <”R-Really?”>

<”Yes, trust me.”>

He looked up at the trainer boy and barked.

“Oh, an electrike.” Bradley pulled out a Pokedex.

Electrike, the Lightning Pokemon. Electrike are often open to defying beliefs and taking a chance if they gather enough courage. the Pokedex stated.

He jumped back at the sudden device language.

“Oh, this is a Pokedex, it tells me about Pokemon that I first meet.” Bradley said. Then he heard Jolt’s tummy growl, and him blush. “Here” The boy produced another bowl of Electrike Type Pokemon food.

Jolt was a bit leery but he sniffed the food and smiled, he hadn’t smelled this kind of food in weeks as he started to chow down on it. the food was full of flavor, the flavor he loved so much. It was simply delicious. He yipped and barked happily.

“You like it?” Bradley asked.

He nodded and nuzzled his leg.

Bradley smiled.

But this moment was ruined, when a Manectric Jumped out of the bushes. <”Step away from my cub!”>

Jolt jumped, it was his mother, <”M-Mom! Wait! Don’t confront him, he;s a friendly nice human!”>

<”What? you befriended this human?”> Manectric asked, suddenly losing her anger.

<“Yes mama,” Jolt protested, “He fed me some food!”>

Jolt’s mother looked at the frightened human and his Pokemon. Then with a smirk, she rushed at the boy, giving him a REALLY hard bite to the Leg. “Now he belong to us.”

Jolt growled, “MOM!!!” He leapt on his mom and start to fight with her. Only to be paralyzed be her static ability.

<”shh... watch.”>

Bradley fell over in pain as his hands started to twitch vigorously as his hands become paws with pink padding.

<”Momma... what are you doing to him”>

Green and yellow fur spread across his body as his position went from bipedal to quadrupedal.

<”Can’t you tell he was an orphan?”>

<”Wha?”>

<”I saw it in his eyes, so I’m claiming him, soon you’ll have a new brother.”>

<”B-But … h-how could I h-h-have known….?”>

<”don;t worry, just go comfort him as he transforms.”>

Jolt obeyed his mother and walked over to the transforming boy. “Are you okay?”

“...i’m scared...” The now half-pokemon replied weakly.

Jolt whined and placed a paw on his shoulder, “It’s okay… Im sorry about my mother..”

“What’s... going to happen to me and my Pokemon?”

“You’re gonna become part of our pack.”

“...will I be... me? you know... keep my mind?”

“Oh yes! My mother wouldn’t bite you if she knew your mind would be changed..”

THe almost Pokemon smiled, struggling to get up. His Pokemon and his new brother help him up. He grew a green tail and his hands and feet became paws as his faced pushed into a muzzle.

“Momma, can you get our new brother and his Friends to the Pack?” Jolt asked.

“Yes my little one.” he smiled as she grabbed the transformed member by the scruff of his neck and waited for the other pokemon to climb up on her back. The Pokemon climbed on, including Zap. She took them back to the pack.

~~~

”Bradley, Catch!” Jolt said, tossing a Frisbee.

Bradley, with his tongue hanging out lazily ran after it and caught it with his mouth, “Caught it!!”

“nice catch, brother! you’ve adjusted to being a Pokemon.” Jolt complimented.

“Thanks guys, it feels really good!”

“Again, I apologize for my momma forcibly transforming you... could you ever forgive me for thrusting this new life on you?” Jolt asked, feeling really guilty

Bradley just smiled and nuzzled his brother, “Thats okay Jolt! Its because of your mom I finally found a family that accepts and wants me” He smiled tearing up a bit.

“Really? You’re okay being a Pokemon?” Jolt asked curiously.

“Totally! Look at how much energy I have! I feel like I could run forever!”

Jolt smiled. Then a little Mareep came by. “Oh hi, Sonya.”

“Sonya?”

“Oh, you’re the new cub? I’m Sonya, i’m a mareep.”
“Oh hi! I’m Bradley! It’s so nice to meet you!” He smiled, the little mareep was really cute.

“Come on, i’ll introduce to the others.” Sonya said, leading the way.

“Sure thing.” Bradley smiled, “Lead the way!”

Jolt and Bradly follow Sonya, leading Bradley into more of his new life.
Special TF 7, Electrike

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Overall, this is another good one (though there's still the whole thing with the grammar), but... I have one main issue.

I hate the Manectric mother. Why? Because she doesn't ever get any consequence for her actions. She just forces Bradley to become an Electrike, and he goes with it all happy and nice. No. It does not work like that. It does not, not, not work like that. By right, Bradley should be monumentally angry at her. I know I'd be if I were forcibly stripped of my humanity without a way out.

Otherwise, it's fine. Good job, Noah and Ryan, you've outdone yourself.